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Old 04-10-2008, 12:35 PM
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it looks like a pretty good start.
one suggestion, remove the part where it says that it contains certain "musings". every freakin blogger wants to share their musings, its always my goal to avoid musings at all costs. pet peeve of mine.
LOL, duly noted.
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Old 04-10-2008, 12:51 PM
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LOL, duly noted.
you get extra credit for being the first derby blog with dick jokes.

but have you noticed most people when they have a personal blog have to say that it contains their musings on this or that?
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Old 04-10-2008, 12:53 PM
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Should've used Xanga and gothed it up.
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Old 04-10-2008, 05:15 PM
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Entertaining and informative..the daily double
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Old 04-10-2008, 05:36 PM
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Can I be honest here?
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Old 04-10-2008, 05:39 PM
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Everyone here is as bored as you so keep it coming.

So far so good...

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Old 04-10-2008, 05:50 PM
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Okay... if anyone else had written this I'd say yeah good job.

... and it IS good.

The thing is expectations and reactions are related and since i expect it to be really good (shut up, you're one of my favorite writers on here ...) I couldn't help but to feel like where was that edge? That thing you're SO good at? That grab-the-reader-by-the-throat thing that you can do and that you have done. I missed that.

It was good but I'll bet the next installment is better.

Aaaah, memories.....

http://www.derbytrail.com/forums/showthread.php?t=2329
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Old 04-10-2008, 05:58 PM
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Jeez, Gioia, it's been up for freaking 12 hours. Give me some time, dammit..
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Old 04-10-2008, 05:59 PM
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Jeez, Gioia, it's been up for freaking 12 hours. Give me some time, dammit..


It was really good.
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