The Vegas Trip (Timeline included)

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Originally Posted by Downthestretch55

The screenplay looks good but needs to be tweaked.
Might help with a bit more "flesh" and less losing.
Definitely a movie, but not a "chick flick".

She says: "Honey, do you want to go see a movie tonight?"
He says: "What did you have in mind?"
She says: "All my girlfriends are telling me to see...blah, blah blah"
He says: We either go to see "Scavs on the Grill" or we see nothin'. It's a dick flick. You coming or not?

A mere movie wouldn't do it justice. Needs to a TV series. Probably have to be on HBO. Funniest thing I've read in a long time. I've been going to Vegas since 1988. Sometimes 2 and 3 times a year, but I thing you had more fun in this one trip than I had in the total of my trips and I always thought that I had fun.