Writing something with that much truth and a little profanity sprinkled in probably won't help his cause in that regard ... but it was a great take with great content. I shared it on Facebook.
In terms of finding something to nitpick about -- for my taste, I think he's giving his readers a little too much credit with his writing sytle.
Don't get carried away with the Thesaurus and flaunt all that Vocab.
Words like feckless, vestiges, facade, obfuscate, nadir, hagiography are words people almost never use. One is good, two is okay, but after that it can get a bit distracting and even annoying when you feel you need to look up a word you don't know for the second God damn time while reading a sports column.
Writers take: A+ Content of material: A+ Number of times I stopped reading it to look up the definition of a word: 3
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