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Originally Posted by Calzone Lord
I left a real wordy chart text up for a minute and a half just to annoy My Miss Storm Cat. The video editing came out beyond terrible and this was a freaking pain in the ass because of it.
Going to have to get better software so I can do this faster and the final product doesn't look horrible -- or I might as well not even bother.
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Thank you for that. I am honored.
I really liked this one a lot (text aside).
Two things... one is don't even say you might not bother anymore and two...
You need to reread this and listen to her cause it is dead on.
(Oh and last thing can I just say I am saddened to have missed Mr. Rare Bog Esquire)?
Nothing against you cause what is said between you two is none of my business but my heart jumped when I saw that name.
Okay read this again NOW!
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Originally Posted by GenuineRisk
Hey, Doug- it's really good and a really, really good idea. That said, a few thoughts for going forward-
MMSC is right; if you can, you should put yourself on video. Two reasons:
1. Video is a visual medium, and something active (a person talking) is good to break up the many static shots-racing forms, still photos, which are very useful and have a place in this, but need some visual motion to break it up a bit.
2. You are young. For the pieces on handicapping tips and techniques, this is a huge plus, as one of the things racing is always grousing about is needing to attract more young bettors. Your youth makes handicapping a race seem accessible to a younger audience.
If you're not going to video yourself, I would still suggest sitting up or standing up to do the voice recording. It gives your voice a bit more energy and focus. You took a little while to warm up, vocally- your voice was very confident and assured a few minutes in to the piece. Bring that quality to the first few minutes of your next video. Sitting up or standing up helps energize your voice from the start.
On a content level, as a novice handicapper viewing it, I would have liked some explanation of why speed duels setting up races for lesser horses are useful. Is it going forward knowing not to bet the winning horse back? Is it a toss out when analyzing a losing horse's race later? Is there a way to recognize when one might happen ahead of time? Since the entire goal of handicapping is to win money, how does being able to recognize a speed duel help when placing a wager?
Also, maybe a line or two explaining the whys- like, why is a speed duel bad? Why is it a fallacy that a horse loose on the lead would run faster if challenged? Hey, that could a fun segment- handicapping myths.
And time-wise, I would suggest keeping them under ten minutes, or even under eight if you can. When you're famous and have your handicapping show on ESPN, you can do 22-minute shows, but the internet is a different beast.
These are just suggestions for improving the look going forward. I really, really hope you continue. You're such a good writer, and are able to explain so clearly what happens in a race- you really could get a wider audience with what you're doing. That said, I'll totally watch them, even if you don't change a thing.
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So the question is are you serious about this or not?
Do you want to build an audience or not?
If you do really... you need to listen to people who are giving you advice.
At least think about it cause we wouldn't waste our time if we didn't believe in you.