Okay... if anyone else had written this I'd say yeah good job.
... and it IS good.
The thing is expectations and reactions are related and since i
expect it to be really good (shut up, you're one of my favorite writers on here
...) I couldn't help but to feel like where was that edge? That thing you're SO good at? That grab-the-reader-by-the-throat thing that you
can do and that you
have done. I missed that.
It was good but I'll bet the next installment is better.
Aaaah, memories.....
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