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Rudeboyelvis 11-28-2008 11:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mortimer
He looked the image of the 2 time National AAU Welterweight Champion that he was.He had a US Marine tat on his right bicep...and a Leapy-PooYearBaby tattoo on his left bicep.

PA










leeeeeeeeeeese















:rolleyes:

Rudeboyelvis 11-28-2008 11:50 PM

You MUST get a grip

Rudeboyelvis 11-28-2008 11:51 PM

It's embarassing

Rudeboyelvis 11-28-2008 11:52 PM

Jus' Thayin'






























;)

Mortimer 11-29-2008 12:07 AM

Well NO...you can't be in the scene.




And you....Elvis impersonator....nothing embarrasses me...especially the truth.

Now stop fucl<ing this up!!

Mortimer 11-29-2008 12:13 AM

Well you are all just going to have to wait now.

You can thank these 2 ne'er-do-wells ( especially the Elvis Impersonator) for this delay.

Rudeboyelvis 11-29-2008 12:15 AM

This scene needs a COMPLETE rewrite. A Leapy-Poo Year baby tat???!!!?









You are MUCH better than this
















Your fans will not fall for it - I'm tellin' ya

Mortimer 11-29-2008 12:17 AM

All right now..I simply won't have anymore of these malcontent intrusions upon my work.

So fine....I will sit here and not type out one thing until you have decided to cease the nonsense---and we still have a looooooong way to go.

Rudeboyelvis 11-29-2008 12:20 AM

Fine. I'm leaving. There's always page 47 of Snowy Woods to rekindle my creativity.



Sheeesh :rolleyes:

Rudeboyelvis 11-29-2008 12:22 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DaHoss9698
Wow.



!!!!OOOOOOOOOO!!!!

:rolleyes:

Mortimer 11-29-2008 12:23 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DaHoss9698
Wow.



!!!!OOOOOOOOOO!!!!


:)


Thank you so much.



But that ain't nothin'.




:)

Mortimer 11-29-2008 12:27 AM

Now can I have some quiet around here?

Scene II is very important as it will set the scene for scene III by describing Arletta and the ....CAH-SOL...she is about to enter......and it's deep dark secrets held by it's owner---and her..

Mortimer 11-29-2008 12:28 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DaHoss9698
I'll admit the left bicep tattoo could use some work. Have you ever read Morty's stories about going into the Cheap Whiskey Bar? You'll never muggy face him again if you have. The guy is an animal.


ror!!!!


HOSSY!!



PLEASE!...my work.

Rudeboyelvis 11-29-2008 12:33 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DaHoss9698
I'll admit the left bicep tattoo could use some work. Have you ever read Morty's stories about going into the Cheap Whiskey Bar? You'll never muggy face him again if you have. The guy is an animal.



Oh man - those were the times.


I fucl<ed this all up.


My apologies.



Please proceed.






I'm just going to image that little satan dude from the World Industies Snowboard logo instead of the Leapy Poo baby tat.



I'm Good.



Please excuse the interruption.






sorry.

Mortimer 11-29-2008 12:37 AM

aw Fer The Love A FUCl<IN' Mike Already!!!!




Stop!!

cowgirlintexas 11-29-2008 01:02 AM

:)













;)




It needs some work baby.... especially with the whole "snatch" thing :rolleyes: LMAO!!!

I laughed..........

LOVE the tats tho... very sexy.........

Do carry on... I await part II with sweaty plams :{>:

Mortimer 11-29-2008 01:19 AM

SCENE II

Arletta had fallen into a deep sleep. Little did she know this was her destination:


http://www.forgottenoh.com/Franklin/franklin.html


Perhaps some points of emptiness should now be filled in.

MORTE' wolf ( also known as The American Psycho of Franklin...CAH-SOL...)was the owner of this spectacular piece of architecture.His reach ran far. He was a predator of world renown; a heat seeking beast of no equal;he did not chew his prey,he merely killed it and moved on........but sometimes not.;)


When it was sometimes not,he would search the world almanac of hotties.Carefully selecting his next prey for play.



Today...Arletta -Poo was chosen.She was chosen for many reasons. The physical ones will be mentioned later. The not so obvious......there are many. mdf knew this was a match made far before either was born.If you do not believe this then go to each ones herespace and look at their official sign up dates.



:{>:




Oh yes.





They are also both fishys....Pisces. Push-Pull....doomed to ravish each other while using an aesthetic broom to sweep away their fears.

What is the GREATEST RIVALRY IN ALL SPORTY WORLDS?

Ohio State-Michigan, as the US Congress done resoluted.


Where was mdf born? Ohio.

Where was Arletta born? Michigan.


Ya foller?





And Arletta was made perfectly for him in a physical way as well.


Listen to this as she comes to life for you ...http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b5Xf0...eature=related




She was 5-4....about 115 to 120 pounds.She was a moo cow--UPS!!..I mean cowgirl. She had a to die for body......tanned by the Texas sun.....shapely legs that showed an uncharted way to her hot,firm,round dupa.Slim ,yet dizzying hips tapered back into a svelte waist which contained a belly button of fine taste......the breasts were not large,but just right. Probably a 34C; each one boasting eraser nipples so square and erect they could charm the venom out of a Texas rattler. The shoulders were in concert with the rest of her " body by lust.'

Her twat was beautiful. Sculptured hair in the shape of a pink horseshoe surrounded it...but it needed no luck. It was plump,pink,creative in its design...sedative in its allure.

The face...oh boy. The face only a sensual savage could wear.The eyes, deep,dark,spheres of brown...sucking any others eyes that dared to stare right into them.A bone structure Michelangelo surely created;long,elegant;melting sharply from forehead to jawbone.....succulent lips of ruby red begging for attention.


Her tan lines of white were scarce....teeny tiny...but offset the brown skin in an extremely sensual way. Nails on feet and hands painted in silver.....her long lions mane in varying hues of tan and brown.....she was the very prototype for mdf bait.




He could not resist her...and now she was being delivered to the ...CAH-SOL...reception area and sent to the ready room.She would be prepped there....and readied for the explosive decompression he would supply her.









( Descriptions of Arletta are made from fact and through the use of mdf's esp)

cowgirlintexas 11-29-2008 01:19 AM

O.k.. back under the covers I go.......:)



















:{>:

Mortimer 11-29-2008 01:21 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by cowgirlintexas
:)















;)




It needs some work baby.... especially with the whole "snatch" thing :rolleyes: LMAO!!!

I laughed..........

LOVE the tats tho... very sexy.........

Do carry on... I await part II with sweaty plams :{>:













OH MY GOD!!



YOU'RE NOT SUPPOSED TO BE HERE!!







OH MY GOD!!

cowgirlintexas 11-29-2008 01:25 AM

LMAO!!!!

Bravo!!!! Fine work....












MORE!!!!!!!!! :{>:

cowgirlintexas 11-29-2008 01:26 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mortimer
OH MY GOD!!



YOU'RE NOT SUPPOSED TO BE HERE!!







OH MY GOD!!


O.k.. Sorry.. storm work me up....



I am going back now :(

Mortimer 11-29-2008 01:30 AM

Thanks to all the hooligan interruptions as well as my own physical...maladies..that I am experiencing,I must ingest 4 Hershey Almond bars to give me the strength to move on and complete the final, savage,animal like scene of epic,erotic proportions.

Mortimer 11-29-2008 01:32 AM

You Are Not Supposed To See This Live!!!!







Oh My God!!!!!!!

Mortimer 11-29-2008 01:38 AM

I must ingest and rest.

I am conjuring up a final scene in my noodle that would get me thrown out of any self respecting message board.

It may take another hour for me to recapture my strength.


WHEW!!

Mortimer 11-29-2008 02:26 AM

FINAL SCENE III.5

( weak hearts and puritan minds should stop here)








Arletta slowly awoke from her mystic sleep.She began to recall the cowboy. Little did she know that was MORTE' in human form....The American Psycho of Franklin...CAH-SOL.


She slowly came to life again in a very pleasurable way. She recalled the ride through times past that got her here. A trip through beautiful perfumed clouds reminding her of this date set long ago. She saw all of her sexual experiences which only readied her for this one. Boy was that night with the CWD bar dancer embarrassing,but she had moved past that now.


She found herself in a dark,but black light lit room...a huge room with vaulting ceilings of warring heights,each peak seeming to challenge another to top it. A huge bed held her little ,soft body.It was the biggest bed she ever saw. 50 ft. by 50 ft.Laying on top of a strange bed spread .....but she loved it's captivating comfort. It was so soft and had the aroma of an animal,but a very dizzying animal like aroma. It was that of the MORTE' WOLF.Spun out of his very own fur.


Fully aware of her surroundings and why she was here,Arletta could not stop the feelings of apprehension from piercing through her thoughts of anticipation.But wait!!...what's this!? She realized she had been dressed in clothes foreign to her. She had on a silky black dress. Short,somewhat tight. Also present were grey/tan nylons showing off her hot legs....affixed to a purple garter belt anchored around her tummy.Her hot spot was found to harbor a meshy canary yellow thong....her breasts held in check by another meshy ,canary yellow holder.

"Oh my God!",said she,"I'm in HUGE trouble!!"


At that very time she heard a man's voice yell out ,"YOO-HOO!" She turned to it's sound. She saw someone in what looked like a booth...he was asking her if she would like free passage out of the room!


And then a shrieking ,booming voice unlike any she ever heard came from nowhere------BOOTH OPERATOR!! GET OUT!!!!"

The swine ran for his life in terror.



Arletta was completely baffled and frightened by these strange happenings.



She notice a stuffed zebra on the bed and held it for security.Just in time ,too, because now she saw a shadow emerge from the darkness....it stopped short of the bed. The voice said..."Hey ,baby."...and as it leaned over Arletta saw it was ..................





.........UNCLY TRUST!!







UNCLY TRUST!! GET OUT!! SHE IS MINE!!!! Said the ferocious voice from nowhere....and Uncly ran away in fear.





Arletta was now getting just a bit irritated by all this. She began to show her no cigarette for 5 hours face.Arletta did not know what next to expect.


She was about to find out.


Someone knew what that face she had just switched to meant.



Showtime.

Mortimer 11-29-2008 03:56 AM

THIS IS IT



mdf was ready.He had turned into the man- wolf that he was...all his life. He was part man,part wolf. I guess that was redundant.:o

Anyhoo....he was ready for her. His exotic body was prepared for sniffing. Doused with frangipani oil;just enough to mix into a dangerous dose of evil when coupled with the natural wolf scent he gave off.A large ,black cape with a bright red lining engulfed his frame.Wild blue eyes,snarling mouth with sparkling ,sharp teeth;prominent canines.He had pumped up by making muscles in the mirrors that were on all walls throughout the ...CAH-SOL...

He made his entrance into the room housing his prey.


Arletta heard the huge oak doors hinges squeak.

No..wait.mdf had stepped on a cat's tail.

OK... now she heard the real sound of the huge oak door being opened.



Her heart leaped into her throat.She cringed on the bed in sitting position...clutching tight the zebra.


That wasn't the zebras name...she was clutching...tight....the zebra.


And the bed wasn't in sitting position---she was.





She stared at the doorway which now exposed mdf in huge shadow form....she began to sniff his intoxicating odor


"Oh my God"..said she...as he approached her she began to slowly crawl away from him.



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UP9_vBeZ7G8




She wanted this animal;yet she feared him. The man wolf was on the bed walking on his knees faster than she could crawl.Of course it could only be this way---she was merely a puny Earthling.

He reached out and softly grabbed an ankle....fortunately for him---it was hers.

He pulled her slowly back toward him.She sniffed him strongly...she felt his electric touch.She was afraid to look back at him. The man -wolf had pulled her right up to him. Her heart was racing.....he couldn't resist this temptation of flesh any longer.He felt up her hot as.s

Thought I was gonna frump out and say"dupa"...huh?"


:)




It was ssssso good!

She responded to his touch immediately by backing up to him ..and bending further at her waist so as to thrust her red hot as.s into his roving hands..paws...whatevah.

She started to sway it..he kept rubbing with one hand.His other found her left leg and he began feeling it up.....rubbing up and down higher and higher until he reached her inner thigh and he rubbed a little harder. She began to groan and moan.She was being thrown into a volcanic burst of lust by his smell and touch...he rubbed and felt with a squeezing hardness after the softness.

Arletta had the swelly and wetty going strong although he had not even found her puss.y..his hand tantalized her as it drew nearer and nearer.

And then....his hand held her little throbbing snatch.Just held it soft. She shrieked...he pressured...she screamed....he held it harder and starting rubbing the thong hiding it.She had to look at him.She turned. She saw.She almost fainted.




Booth Operator and UnclyTrust peeking through the door DID faint!!


Arletta showed her hand toward him..it parted his cape. She had to see and feel that joint.He had broken through the guard her thong offered and she felt his hand softly feeling his way all around her pus.sy. She groaned more and then---she had his joint in her hand!!


"r u kidding me!!"Arletta was incredulous as to his prehistoric size.He was making her sopping wet with his fingers now.She couldn't wait any longer...FUCl< ME!!...she demanded.He didn't have to be told a second time. He now held her hips and slowly began to insert this huge joint into her as she now faced flat on the bed...."Thank goodness she let go of my joint first"...thought the man-wolf.She shoved pelvis thrusts high and back into him ...yelling to fucl< her harder.Her appetite for MORE!!...HARDER!!was insatiable.





EAUXH!!!!



She screamed as it drilled slowly into her . Her vaginal walls never had to spread like this. An instant of sharp pain gave way to an complete entire excitation of every nerve ending in her body.He was sucking in her clit with every hard thrust...so huge was he.

Arletta screamed out...MY PUS.SY IS SSSSSO HOT FOR YOU...YOU FUCl<IN' BEAST!!! She was going out of her mind as he fucl<ed her pus.sy .She felt neutron bomb orgasms;flaming with white hot heat;searing her vaginal nerve ganglia....exploding her clit...one after another,but she couldn't get enough of him. He held her hips and pumped all the harder.


Arletta screamed for him to stop...she needed that joint in her mouth.She cat like turned and yelled...I want that cock in my mouth!! She had a filthy way about her when driven crazy.



She took it in...she gagged...and took more..until she couldn't take anymore.She sucked it hard and slow...and swirled up and down.Her hands roamed his rock like body all over.She tasted the magic potion that was the two of them.The man- wolfs eyes were beginning to cross...he let out a scream.






AROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!


She released him and laid on her back...opened her legs up.

He got the hint.


He began pounding her again..thrusting her vagina with that huge joint. She pulled him down...grabbed his mouth with hers and sucked his tongue until it almost came out.Then she sucked on his long incisors;they felt like his joint in their hardness.


EAUXH!!!!...FUCl< ME HARDER--FASTER!!..now she was getting mean.She pushed him back so he was upright;still pumping into her. She propped herself up on her elbows.Her head reached for his. She began to scream...IS THAT ALL YOU GOT??----FUCl<ME YOU SISSY BEAST!!

mdf thought..."Oh my God!!...SHE'S the beast!!"...but he obeyed her. Arletta started to bark out more vicious orders,but his joint got the best of her. She flopped back onto the bed...screaming and shrieking unintelligibles. She felt his weapon get of an enormous size now.....she felt the hot vibrations racing through her body....she was vibrating at high speed now....she was going to let it all fly out now...and so---she did.


The man wolf almost ran for fear of his life...if not for the heat of what was going on in his joint.He watched her do things he never saw a human do before. Her face turned into a screaming,grimacing purple blur of morphisms.

And then..her final order bellowed out.


COME ON MY TITS!!!


COME ON MY TITS!!



Just in time,too!.....and so.....the beast did. Shooting an eruption so hot and at such velocity that Arletta went back to stage 5 demonic possession all over again.She screamed in foreign languages and convulsed as the man- wolf shot the last streak of hot fire directly onto her face.


























How much time had passed? She did not know.All she knew is she was unable to move. Floating in space time with a euphoria unknown to her.She had been utterly hammered and laid to waste by the greatest lover/beast of all time.


She heard him...."That's you ,MORTE'--that's you!!"


He was laughing and making muscles in the mirror.





THE END

Mortimer 11-29-2008 03:57 AM

I am like SSSSO dead!!!!

Mortimer 11-29-2008 05:05 AM

WELL DID YOU EVAH!!!!





http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=33Jaodra7AY


Nighty-poo.

Payson Dave 11-29-2008 06:09 AM

fine ....really fine work there mdf.....:$:


that Arletta is Shirely jest lak it says in the song......

Say things to me like a cowgirl would
I'll do tricks for you like a cowboy should
You look romantic layin' in the hay
I need you tonight in a new kinda way
When you look at me with those eyes
It makes me start to fantasize

Do it to me like I know you could....

Mortimer 11-29-2008 06:24 AM

!!!!



ror!!






Gonna be a long day for this fine sporty writer there,buddy.Actually..it could have been bettah , but oh well.

I think I made my point.

TOO KIND!

Payson Dave 11-29-2008 06:35 AM

I especialy liked the cameo appearance of Uncly..:tro:
She is such a pu$$y hound don't ya know

Mortimer 11-29-2008 06:49 AM

snort!!

cowgirlintexas 11-29-2008 07:01 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mortimer
I am like SSSSO dead!!!!

OH



My


God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




















:o

cowgirlintexas 11-29-2008 07:08 AM

Morty!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


You were right about the "in trouble" part.....










You just wait.......until I get my hands on you!!! You'll be screamin' like a baby for sure!!:mad:

















Actually...You put so much thought into your "finale" that I can only hope that it caused you great discomfort :p








;) :{>:

cowgirlintexas 11-29-2008 07:09 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mortimer
!!!!



ror!!






Gonna be a long day for this fine sporty writer there,buddy.Actually..it could have been bettah , but oh well.

I think I made my point.

TOO KIND!


And what exactly was that point?

cowgirlintexas 11-29-2008 07:10 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mortimer
WELL DID YOU EVAH!!!!





http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=33Jaodra7AY


Nighty-poo.

CHICKEN!!!!!!!!!!!


You knew I'd be up soon.... :p

TheSpyder 11-29-2008 07:16 AM

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